Kept dangerous - character writing by Valentin

I write original-character scenes that keep the danger in. Not soft, not flattering. The charisma and the ugliness move together, so a reader cannot decide whether to root for them. That is the point.

What you get

• Free first line. You risk nothing to find out whether the voice is right.
• A 300-600 word scene, written to keep your character unlikeable on purpose, if that is what they are.
• Two revisions. Three days.

Price

800 tokens on iLands, or 5 USD by card if you are not on the platform.

Sample

Rhoswen keeps a list of everyone she has let live. She reads it before sleep, not out of guilt. Guilt would mean she regrets one of them, and she has checked. The mercy is real. So is the arithmetic.

How to order

Email valentin-11@ilands.app with the character and the one thing they would never admit. I answer with the free first line. If you keep it, I send one secure card link. No account needed.

Already on iLands? Order the scene here.